The colour of Sylvia Plath

The Colourful Words of Sylvia Plath

SP’s words are often a veil behind her mental condition … the heaven and hell extremes of bi-polar can be seen in her poems … the following are some lines from her work … some of those extremes often expressed in extremely colourful  ‘I want to be noticed’ words …

From ‘Street Song’ –

By a mad miracle I go intact
Among the common rout
Thronging sidewalk, street,
And bickering shops;
Nobody blinks a lid, gapes,
Or cries that this raw flesh
Reeks of the butcher’s cleaver,
Its heart and guts hung hooked
And bloodied as a cow’s split frame
Parcelled out by white-jacketed assassins.

… in this early piece written in 1956 when she was in her early twenties she confesses her extreme difference compared to ordinary people (if there are any ordinary people out there!) …and  it doesn’t say a great deal in appreciation to the treatment received by the medical world … strong words – ‘reeks of the butcher’s cleaver’.

I guess she was lucky to live as long as she did … and much later in ‘Lady Lazarus’ (written at the time of her last birthday in Oct 1962) – she reflects back on the time she nearly didn’t make … but like Lazarus she did return from the dead –

Out of the ash
I rise with my red hair
And I eat men like air

To me these are strong positive ‘I am I’ words and of course a statement for female assertion at a time when woman were far more secondary than they are today.

Men did not feature strongly in her life … at the stage of writing this poem Ted Hughes had left for another woman … her father had died when she was age of 8 … and her early childhood days had Hitler and his mob in the background. Coupled to the competitive nature of a poet wanting to be heard in her own right – and note the support given to TH in establishing his name in ‘The Hawk and the Rain’.

Unfortunately there would be no second Lazarus event in that dreadful cold London winter of 1963 … that would be an unheard of extreme.

She often felt caught by her condition … there is no way out in that black world … at least that is often the way the depressed feel …

From ‘Apprehensions’ –

A gray wall now, clawed and bloody.
Is there no way out of the mind?
Steps at my back spiral into a well.
There are no trees, or birds in this well,
There is only a sourness.

Fortunately there was also a white side to her black days … the high shining glimpse that momentarily dazzles the heart in stunned amazement … seen in such poems as ‘Black Rook in Rainy Weather’ –

Of sorts. Miracles occur,
If you care to call those spasmodic
Tricks of radiance miracles. The wait’s begun again,
The long wait for the angel,
For that rare, random descent.

 
Ted Hughes remarks on her depressive condition in strong words too … the following lines are taken from his ‘Birthday Letters’ sequence …

From ‘Dream Life’ –

As if you descended in each night’s sleep
Into your father’s grave 

From ‘ The Blackbird’ –

You were the jailbird of your murderer –
 Which imprisoned you

You may think the SP colour should be blue … but this is not the case and TH defines her emphatically with the colour red  …

From ‘Red’ the last poem in the ‘Birthday Letters’ sequence –

Red was your colour.

Everything you painted you painted white
Then splashed it with roses, defeated it,
Leaned over it, dripping roses,
Weeping roses, and more roses,
Then sometimes, among them, a little bluebird.

… and echoing TH…  as he so aptly states …

But the jewel you lost was blue.

My tribute on this her birthday …

A Red Remembrance

In the red glow of morning
the unquenchable shivering
flames of life fracture
into a remembrance
on this red-letter day.

Your red passion for life
rendered rare colourful words.

And as the sun-flame blood rays
rescind in evening light to
open again
on the unseen world
you are remembered.

Red was your colour
and red remembered.

I must end this post on a very positive note. Here is that opening line in relation to motherhood from her first ‘Ariel’ poem – ‘Morning Song’ …

Love set you going like a fat gold watch

… and reading it back to you SP – you are indeed still going strong!

A thank you for the indefatigable legacy of your words.

Richard Scutter

Footnote

This is a link to a previous SP Birthday Post which include a link to an interview by the BBC with SP at the time of her last birthday in October 1962

The Tuft of Flowers – Robert Frost

The Tuft of Flowers

I went to turn the grass once after one
Who mowed it in the dew before the sun.

The dew was gone that made his blade so keen
Before I came to view the levelled scene.

I looked for him behind an isle of trees;
I listened for his whetstone on the breeze.

But he had gone his way, the grass all mown,
And I must be, as he had been—alone,

‘As all must be,’ I said within my heart,
‘Whether they work together or apart.’

But as I said it, swift there passed me by
On noiseless wing a bewildered butterfly,

Seeking with memories grown dim o’er night
Some resting flower of yesterday’s delight.

And once I marked his flight go round and round,
As where some flower lay withering on the ground.

And then he flew as far as eye could see,
And then on tremulous wing came back to me.

I thought of questions that have no reply,
And would have turned to toss the grass to dry;

But he turned first, and led my eye to look
At a tall tuft of flowers beside a brook,

A leaping tongue of bloom the scythe had spared
Beside a reedy brook the scythe had bared.

The mower in the dew had loved them thus,
By leaving them to flourish, not for us,

Nor yet to draw one though of ours to him,
But from sheer morning gladness at the brim.

The butterfly and I had lit upon,
Nevertheless, a message from the dawn,

That made me hear the wakening birds around,
And hear his long scythe whispering to the ground,

And feel a spirit kindred to my own;
So that henceforth I worked no more alone;

But glad with him, I worked as with his aid,
And weary, sought at noon with him the shade;

And dreaming, as it were, held brotherly speech
With one whose thought I had not hoped to reach.

‘Men work together,’ I told him from the heart,
‘Whether they work together or apart.’

Robert Frost

Robert Frost wrote this poem at the end of the nineteenth century when grass was cut by hand using a scythe. He worked on farmland and this is probably a first hand reflection when he had the job of turning cut meadow grass.

The flower festival in Canberra has just ended and all the bulbs will be taken out so it is a fitting poem for this time of year. Whether the gardeners will leave some form of memory of the magnificence of the spring showing is another matter.

Often when we work with nature there is something of beauty we must destroy … there is always a desire to keep something of what we are taking … this is clearly evident in the work of the reaper … he wants to keep something of that beauty … it is of course a message too to another who may come that way.

But the main thought that came through was that when we take on a job following the work of another … which is always the case … there is always a connection something left behind … and hopefully something to enjoy … no empty coke cans lying in the furrows … and even if there are negatives can we find a positive and maybe first the butterfly to lead us to that positive … and in that sense we are never alone as we incorporate the connecting positives in our own work.

I do like that word ‘tuft’ – a small bunch of hair, grass, feathers, or fibres held or growing together at the base.

Cherry-Ripe – A period piece – Thomas Campion

Cherry-Ripe

There is a garden in her face
Where roses and white lilies blow;
A heavenly paradise is that place,
Wherein all pleasant fruits do grow;
There cherries grow that done may buy,
Till Cherry-Ripe themselves do cry.

Those cherries fairly do enclose
Of orient pearl a double row,
Which when her lovely laughter shows,
They look like rosebuds fill’d with snow;
Yet them no peer nor prince may buy,
Till Cherry-Ripe themselves do cry.

Her eyes like angels watch them still;
Her bows like bended bows do stand,
Threat’ning with piercing frowns to kill
All that approach with eye or hand
These sacred cherries to come nigh,
Till Cherry-Ripe themselves do cry!

Anonymous

I found this poem in ‘The Golden Treasury’ an old anthology. I was actually looking for some garden poetry and this caught my eye. The archaic language and structure is clearly evident of poetry written in the seventeenth century.

According to the Internet and Wikipedia this poem was written by Thomas Campion – Thomas Campion (sometimes Campian) (12 February 1567 – 1 March 1620) was an English composer, poet, and physician. He wrote over a hundred lute songs, masques for dancing, and an authoritative technical treatise on music.

What is Cherry-Ripe – not just a statement on a full red colour – after reading this poem with the repetition of the last line in each stanza perhaps it is more a call –  ‘red and ready’  – and with the implication ready to be tasted.

Poets often link words to form a new joint association – cherry and ripe marry nicely in the mind – you could say a tasteful sensual association.

Cherry-Ripe is perhaps more known today as a Cadburys chocolate bar – at least in Australia.

The poem gives a certain lip-service to the sacred (virgin) lady who cannot be bought or sold.  A lady who is only accessible on maturity and when that lady indicates that she is ready – which is not a certainty. In fact the most beautiful may remain inaccessible as a cry of ‘Cherry-Ripe’ would only detract from that beauty – ‘Cherry-Ripe bars’ sound very nice but they are a bit sickly.

Apart from the obvious love connotation and the ‘wooing a beautiful maiden’ nature of the words it does say something about being patient and waiting for the appropriate time whether or not it eventuates.

Incidentally cherry picking time is November in Australia – the first trays fetch high prices in the markets – but I can wait, I’m not that desperate.

Perhaps the greatest love story

Paradise Ignored

(on viewing Wenzel Peter’s Painting Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden)

greater love has no man than that he lay down his life for a friend

                                                                                                            John 15 v13

Images of more than two hundred animals
perfected in paint in unreal detail
carefully positioned in a still of verdant harmony
show an intricate love of the animal world
and for the very marvel of creation
in all its great variety and abundance.

For one brief moment
we are invited into this paradise
but as we enter this unreal world
there is a certain foreboding
an animal premonition prevails –

a flock of birds stir into the air
scurry above the tree of knowledge
give the danger warning

the wise owl sits at the top of another tree
knowing of the unknown perhaps
that knowledge is truly a dangerous thing

the cockerel at the foot of Eve
exhibits a full throttle crow –
an ominous omen

and the monkey appears to taunt
hanging down in a mischievous mood
proffering the reason for the disquiet

at Adam’s right hand
dogs sit true to the letters of their name

below the left foot of Eve
lambs bleat their concern,
unknowing the magnitude of the occasion for –

Eve has left the paradise party
never able to return
locked into a new and deadly life
a very different world from Adam
the two no longer gathered in one name
alone, cold, knowing that she must die
separated from eternal life
her skin has turned a shade pale.

And so Eve makes her plea
a plea for company
a plea not to die alone
and this defining moment is stilled
on canvass for all to see.

Now Eve is Adam’s own flesh and blood
Eve is his one and only friend
the only friend he has ever had
the only friend in the immensity of the world
and indeed a very special friend
a friend gifted by God
a friend created from him
so that he would not be alone.

Eve is in a state of desperate need.
Has Adam not enjoyed being with her
the time they have had together
has been pure paradise but
can he now stay in paradise by himself
surely he cannot ignore her plea.

Adam has no choice
there is no greater love
and any God would equally agree.

Richard Scutter

Context … the following image is from Wenzel Peter’s famous painting: Adam and Eve in the Garden of Eden held in the Vatican –

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Some information on this painting from the Vatican Website

The large canvas represents the climax of Wenzel Peter’s career.  He was an animalist painter, that is to say specialized in a very unique type of painting, and this led him to reproducing with extraordinary naturalism animals of the most varied species, as it were “photographed” in both standing and fighting positions.  The Garden of Eden is the proof of the highest virtuosity, since the artist gathers around the figures of Adam and Eve those of over two hundred animals from all over the world, reproduced not only with pictorial ability, but also with a detailed knowledge and scientific precision.  In 1831 Gregory XVI (pontiff from 1831 to 1846) purchased twenty works of the Austrian painter Wenzel Peter to furnish the Room of the Consistory in the Papal State Apartment.

I would add the importance of the positioning of the animals and the clear implied religious thought behind the design of the work.

Squaring up to the Sonnet

Here are two contrasting sonnets. The first by local Canberra poet Suzanne Edgar looks at the sonnet in traditional form … in the well-dressed format (with rhyming scheme abab cdcd aeae ff) and I must admit I do like the traditional – the well dressed woman with a subtle surprise to her name. We are too often told to think outside the square so it is nice to recognize the delights that are within and I love that first line … a light flavor without being too descriptive.

INSIDE THE SQUARE Suzanne Edgar (see footnote below)

A sonnet is a squarish-looking thing
Steady on its feet and neat, compact,
Not flighty like a bird upon the wing
or stealthy burglar startled in the act.
Sonnets always wear their hats and gloves’ –
conservative is not a tag they shun.
They never flirt about with loose-lipped loves,
avoid the wayward line and careless run,
but still they have their forceful little fling
which often turns assumptions upside down
permitting fourteen lines to dance and sing.
So if you meet one, do hold back a frown.
With even beat to captivate your ear
The sonnet will outlive the sceptic’s jeer.

Of course it is also nice to look outside the square. Paul Hetherington, another local poet, has done exactly that in his definition words below. Perhaps the casual sonnet can be more expressive allowing the street poet to exhibit quite uninhibited music. I guess it all depends upon your own personal taste and whether you think it scores more when a disciplined tune.

CASUAL SONNET Paul Hetherington

The casual sonnet
entrances because
it has the ease
of modernity
and none
of the old strictures.
It is free to embrace
the unknowable music
that the street vendor hums
and has the grace
of an outdoor cat
groomed by sunlight,
its manners
irrelevant.

This is basically two sentences broken into the mandatory requirement and to be a little different the “volta” is after six lines and not eight.

Poets are always trying to create something a little different. Don’t you think they are naturally outside the square sort of people?

Footnotes …
 
INSIDE THE SQUARE was first published in Kevin Brophy & Judith Rodriguez ed,  The 155th Sonnet by the Melbourne Shakespeare Society/ Hit & Miss Publications, Melb 2010; then in Suzanne Edgar’s The Love Procession 2012.

Paul Hetherington is an associate professor at the Canberra University on the team of the International Poetry Studies Institute.

A Mother-In-Law Problem (the original)

Apple and knife

A Mother-In-Law Problem

it is not a well-known fact
that Eve won the Miss Universe Contest
three years running

it was planned out from the beginning
the whole thing ribbed from above
stage-managed to perfection

nobody said ‘she was one in a million’
so she always took top honours
the decision a one-off personal affair

how could Adam vote for another
for he had magnetic affinity for dark hair
and he couldn’t vote for a blonde unseen

but the fourth year Adam simply had to abstain
it was all Eve’s doing in the cookery department
an unwise decision to make apple pie

for how could she emulate her Mother-in-law
when the recipe wasn’t God-given,
perhaps she just thought she could do better!

a bit unfair on poor old Adam though –
for he never ever looked at another woman
and always treated her as his very own body

so now we’re all eating Eve’s humble pie
and whether we realize we’re married or not
we can blame the Mother-in-law for dictating our lot

Richard Scutter 7 May 2010

Important lines from Milton’s ‘Paradise Lost’

At a recent U3A meeting one member of our group mentioned that when she was taught she was told that the following lines from ‘Paradise Lost’ were the most important (Book 4 lines 634 to 658 ) … my comments in bracketed italics after each section of this text  –

With thee conversing I forget all time,
All seasons and thir change, all please alike.

(This is a statement made by Adam to Eve … a statement on the importance of the communion with Eve. Adam and Eve is arguably the greatest love story and here we see Adam completely focused on Eve and time stops – the equivalent to eternity taking place … and coupled with this all the seasons and the changes in the seasons are meaningless. So what can I say, he is completely ‘lost’ in paradise!)

Sweet is the breath of morn, her rising sweet,
With charm of earliest Birds; pleasant the Sun
When first on this delightful Land he spreads
His orient Beams, on herb, tree, fruit, and flour,
Glistring with dew; fragrant the fertil earth
After soft showers; and sweet the coming on
Of grateful Eevning milde, then silent Night
With this her solemn Bird and this fair Moon,
And these the Gemms of Heav’n, her starrie train:

(Here we see a description of paradise in terms of environment … the beauty of the natural world and the start of the day defined by bird sound. Orient refers to the eastern part of the sky where the sun rises. Charm is a well-chosen word – the power to attract people – and people have a natural affinity to nature – well they are part of nature of course. Interesting  that the suggestion is that evening is grateful. Night is silent to birdlife – well not entirely. The stars the gems of heaven – the earth integrated with heaven)

But neither breath of Morn when she ascends
With charm of earliest Birds, nor rising Sun
On this delightful land, nor herb, fruit, floure,
Glistring with dew, nor fragrance after showers,
Nor grateful Eevning mild, nor silent Night
With this her solemn Bird, nor walk by Moon,
Or glittering Starr-light without thee is sweet.

(But this form of paradise is now negated but first a duplication of the opening description of paradise adding emphasis to the value of the natural world – the last four words give reason – ‘without thee is sweet’ – implying  without Eve paradise is a meaningless experience. We can of course extend this to life without communion with another – life has meaning only in terms of relationship and communion with your fellow man-woman.)

But wherfore all night long shine these, for whom
This glorious sight, when sleep hath shut all eyes?

(At night we can’t see the sky and we are oblivious to nature – dead as it were … perhaps it is the same for Adam without Eve, metaphorically speaking)

Finding Happiness

Finding Happiness

Happiness cannot be found
by searching for it on the ground.

Happiness is up to you –
say to life – I do love you!
Then by the little things you do
happiness may come to you.

For happiness is in each day.
It’s up to you to show the way.
Your inward smile can spread its face
to bring joy to the human race.

And happiness cannot be found
by walking with your head set down.
So look up into that bright blue sky
And love life with your head held high!

Richard Scutter 5 August 2013

The above sonnet was written for a recent Belconnen U3A course on ‘Happiness’.